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V Union - Mu DEPARTMENT *70 PARK AVENUE. MEW YORK. ISL Y. 10017 HSHDRKDQH SeptMber 3. 1981 oowpiflomAL TO* ? A. LIdcoIj)^ H.Q. X am attaching for consideration suggested changes to year proposed letter to Texas City employees, re the epidemiology study, is did other EtEbers present at our August 28 seetlng, X found your draft to he quite veil done and want to offer y coeplleenta. Hy suggested changes reflect an effort to tighten the aessage and organize the letter In a acre formal, report foevat far enployees which we will need for outside audiences as well. I reoosBend consideration of this approach ioasaoch as our letter will become a public document, available for reference, reproduction and interpretation hy interested media, local officials and government agencies. Thus, I have Bade an effort to write for all audiences without compromising the nost Important goal of helping our employees understand the complex nature of these studies. Wfflrir CC: S. 0. Austin. Sc.D. J. B. Browning B. L. Doan D. L. Cagle D. H. Glenn. H.P. R. Leriton K. C. Lewis A* G. Tores* J. V.. Whittlesey ucc 096803 > v ' r TO: T A. Llnooln. M-0* r i.M 1. 1. Bosrgar I am attaohlag for oonaidsrmtloa suggested to your proposed latter to Tnu city liTiijaia, rs the epldalology study. As %!d otfcsr sobers present st our August 26 nesting* I fowd roar draft to bs quits wall dons and asst to offsr UT ooapllasnta. Hr suggsotsd ctiangsa rsfleet sn sffort to tldbtao tbs aassags and crgaalss tbs lsttsr in a nor* fornal, roport faruat far w^loyses. I tsmomwd consideration of tbla approeob liwifitl aa our lsttsr util beooae s public dootaect, available for rsferenos* reproduction sod lstorprstatiou bj interested ssdla, local officials and gorsniMUt agoooisa. Thus, 1 have usds an sffort to writs for all andisDsaa without oospruaialog tbs sost laportant goal of faalpiag our eaployees understand tbs oosplsx natur# of tbaaa studies* CC: S. 0* Austin, Se.D* J. B. Browning K, U boon / t-. L. Bagla * S. S. Clw, M.D. I. Lsviton M. C i.arll A . 7-tf^ss J. Av ttattlss*? UCC 096804