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November 1, 1987 Hugo Dunlap Smith, M.D. Professor of Pediatrics The Children's Hospital Research Foundation Elland Avenue and Bethesda Cincinnati, Ohio 45229 Dear Hugie: I have commented fairly extensively on the document which you sent t;> me yesterday, in two sets of sheets. One of these marked "a " gives some suggestions of mine for actual rewriting. The other marked "b " elaborates a bit on some of the faults of the document as I see them. 1 hope my efforts to be helpful will serve your purposes. You are at liberty to use my comments in any way you choose. I'll be glad to discuss any of the points Involved If you wish me to. Sincerely yours, RAK:wp enclosures Robert A. Kehoe, M.D. Professor Emeritus of Occupational MBdlcine te- i 00089