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Ame r ic a n Me d ic a l As s o c ia t io n
535 NORTH DEARBORN STREET CHICAGO, ILLINOIS 60610 PHONE (312) 751-6000 TWX 910-221-0300
HUGH H. HUSSEY, MD. Director Division pf Scientific Publications
CHARLES F. CHAPMAN Managing Editor
August 10, 1973
MU SflEClM.Tr JOURNALS
Aicbives of Dermatology
American Journal of Diseases of Children
Archives pf Environmental Health
Archives of General Psychiatry
Archives of Internal Medicine
Archives of Neurology Archives of Ophthalmology
Archives of Otolaryngology Archives of Pathology Archives of Surgery
Martha McLaughlin Haskell Laboratories for
Toxicology & Industrial Medicine E. 1. du Font de Nemours & Company Wilmington, Delaware 19898
Re: "Longitudinal Studies of Lead Levels in a IIS Population"
Dear Ms. McLaughlin:
An edited typescript is enclosed for your final checking and approval. Also enclosed is a layout, with reproductions of the illustrations showing placement of title and copy. The reproductions should not be misconstrued as representing final engraving quality. Please indicate any necessary changes in a covering letter rather than on the typescript. Page proofs or galley proofs are no longer sent put for approval. We will be responsible for checking your material against printer's proofs.
Please check carefully for any errors or changes in title, subtitle, by-line, and affiliation footnote, as shown on the front sheet (page 1). We have deleted the BA and BS degrees from the by-line, as is our policy.
Is the name and address at end of footnotes, on page 1, the one you will be using on a relatively long-term basis for reprint purposes?
The manuscript has been edited according to present AMA style. For example, most abbreviations appear without periods.
The circled numbers "Grk 36," etc., are instructions for the printer to set Greek characters and are not changes in copy.
Vacutainer and Corning (page 5) appear to be trade names. Since we try to avoid publishing trade names in the text of the paper, we must ask that you supply suitable nonproprietary designations.
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Please supply the highest academic degrees of Dobbins, Delate, and Stopps (page 14).
On page 6, 1mt line, please verify the hyphenation of chloroform-soluble.
Please verify our change of Table 3 to Table 6 in the legend for Figure 1.
Please expand df, ms, Also, please expand L sideheads of Table 4.
and F in the headings of Tables 4 and 5. and X (is this the times sign?) in the
Your footnote cited in the legend to Figure 4 has been incor porated into the reference list as reference 4 and the remaining references renumbered accordingly.
Please supply the following information to complete the reference list: reference 1--publisher (is it the Industrial Hygiene Foundation?), city in which the publisher is located; reference 7---publisher, city in which the publisher is located and year of publication; and reference 8, year of publication.
For your convenience we are enclosing a reprint order form with the correct number of pages indicated. The senior author of a major contribution will receive 200 complimentary tearsheets; these will be stapled, without covers, and may include a portion of the preceding or following article. Regular reprints may be ordered with the enclosed form.
Prompt correction and return of your manuscript will help us to get it into print as fast as possible. Please return this typescript, along with the layout and reprint order form, in the enclosed self-addressed envelope no later than August 20, 1973,
Sincerely yours
CI:pt Enel
Cheryl Iverson Copy Editor
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