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To: Cc: From: Sent: Subject: John BachmannOohnbachmann@bellsouth.net] Lisa Bucher[lbucher@awma.org] Dravis, Samantha Tue 7/25/2017 2:22:31 PM RE: Your paper is accepted, next steps John, Could you provide me your phone number again? I'd like to chat with you about this. In short, I am going to withdraw this for publication in EM. Samantha From: John Bachmann [mailto:johnbachmann@bellsouth.net] Sent: Monday, July 24, 2017 2:36 PM To: Dravis, Samantha <dravis.samantha@epa.gov> Cc: Lisa Bucher <lbucher@awma.org>; Lovell, Will (William) <lovell.william@epa.gov> Subject: Your paper is accepted, next steps Hi Samantha, As you may recall the EM editorial board conducts a light review of all articles. They use a form that includes boilerplate questions, several of which really don't apply the kind of perspective pieces that are included in this particular issue. Below is a note from EM editor Lisa Bucher on the particulars of what comes next. All five reviewers recommended publication, and their completed forms are attached below. We ask that you consider the minor comments that some made and decide on whether you want to make any revisions either in response to the review or any you may want to make on your own. The note details the deadline for submitting final version, with or without revisions. Please submit directly to Lisa at the address above and copy me. John B. 17cv1906 Sierra Club v. EPA - 6/22 Production ED 001523 00008549-00001 I am pleased to inform you that your article has been accepted for publication in the September 2017 issue of EM Magazine, pending consideration of potential revisions as detailed by our reviewers (please see the article evaluations attached to this e-mail as .pdfs). We ask that you consider ail of the review comments when revising your article for publication. Please submit the FINAL version of the article for publication as soon as possible or by no later than July 31, 2017. This deadline has been established to help staff meet the publishing deadlines for the September issue. **Please let me know immediately if you will be unable to meet this deadline.** Note that all major revisions to the text should be made at this stage. Only crucial revisions (e.g., typos, key technical errors, time-sensitive edits) can be made once the article has been laid out into page proofs in order to avoid text re-flow from page to page. Please visit http://www.awma.orq/emquidelinesto read EM's author guidelines for questions regarding style, formatting, and so forth. We strongly encourage authors to include graphics and other app-friendly digital enhancements (e.g., audio, video, animations), where possible. Any accompanying figures/graphics/photos should be submitted separately from the text as either .eps, .jpeg, or .tiff files and should have a resolution of 600 dpi (minimum) at the size they are to be published in the magazine. Please let me know if you have any questions. We look forward to receiving the article for publication in EM. 17cv1906 Sierra Club v. EPA - 6/22 Production ED 001523 00008549-00002